[Twg] draft2 of the whitepaper

[John Carrier]

Thanks to the discussion at today's meeting, we have a new version of the whitepaper.  Attached are two PDF versions.  The one labeled markup shows exactly what changed from the first version.

PLEASE take a look and send any corrections (edits, additions, deletions) to me ASAP.  I will send the corrected doc to all of the working groups tomorrow.

Thanks for your help.

--jc

Ps - let me know if you want the original MS word docx version and I'll send it along.
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